We are a hungry and insatiable lot.
We are willing to stand at the bottom of Niagara Falls and open our mouths in hopes that the right drop finds its way into our system and, magically, gives us spot-on insight, adds poetry to our prose, jolts our plot into overdrive, gives substance and gravitas to our protagonists and villains.
We want every tip and, if possible, we’d like them all now, please.
We want your secret and your insight and we’d like a detailed diagram of the key you used to unlock the storytelling process.
I was in Grand Junction recently helping put on a writers’ conference and one of the presenters, who had written some 75 romance novels, mentioned a book called Save the Cat by Blake Snyder.
Boom! I’m all over it. Turns out it’s a book for screenwriters, but I don’t care. (And it’s very good, in fact—lots of great tips that are useful for novelists, too.)
I even went to see “The Words” (with Bradley Cooper, Dennis Quaid, Jeremy Irons) and sat through the turgid and terrible movie about fiction writing and plagiarism, in hopes of picking up a tip or two. (Left with an empty feeling in more ways that one.)
I listed to Scriptnotes Podcast (www.johnaugust.com) and always take away a thought or two about plot and structure.
At the annual Colorado Gold conference put on by Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers last weekend, there were 400 or more of us writers all buzzing around for three full days, attending 60+ workshops and listening to terrific keynote speeches. I didn’t see an uninterested face in the bunch.
I have attended many writer conferences and, quite frankly, can’t get enough.
Bored of talk about character arc? Not me.
Need another workshop on query letters? Bring it on.
Want to hear the discouraging inside buzz on the publishing industry? Of course, every downbeat morsel.
Books about writing and conferences about writing are kind of like the health magazines that all say the same thing—eat better, eat less, exercise more—but find new headlines and new shades of gray to promote each month.
So, below, I’ve compiled a few of my favorite tips from last weekend’s conference.
If you’re a writer, you’ve heard them all before.
You’ll hear them all again.
But right now—right about now—maybe one of these will be what you need.
- When you write, use compelling cadence.
- Trust your “cadence ear.”
- Read your stuff aloud.
- Listen to how it flows.
- When you write, use power words.
- Power words carry power.
- A good book is essentially the right information in the right dosage dispensed at the right time.
- It’s a good idea to know what your story is about.
- It’s okay to start with a vomit draft.
- Rewriting is forever.
- We’ve been refining writing and storytelling for a very long time.
- Always start your story on the first day the story starts.
- Avoid your personal patterns.
- Find something fresh to say.
- Say it in a fresh way.
- Never give your character what they want.
- In the end, give your characters what they need.
- Dangerous times make for interesting reading. Set your story during a dangerous time.
- Accept that failure is part of this business.
- Don’t get stuck on one story or one novel. Move on.
- Drop in back story like a trail of breadcrumbs.
- You should know your story from the villain’s point of view.
- You should know your story from your victim’s point of view.
- Then you can start writing the story from your protagonist’s point of view.
- This business will humble you at every turn.
- At. Every. Single. Turn.
By the way, my favorite writing book of all time is Techniques of the Selling Writer by Dwight V. Swain. The “Plain Facts About Feelings” chapter is a beauty. (Ignore the crass cover!)
But you can’t beat Anne Lamott’s Bird by Bird, either, if you’re looking for an injection of pure inspiration.
If there’s another good book out there about writing, of course, please let me know.
I like that it’s okay to start with a vomit draft. I did that last fall with NaNoWriMo and find it a very satisfying way to get a novel started.
It was great to see you at Colorado Gold, Mark. As always, I came home motivated and energized.
Gonna try the ‘hurl’ method…must get past my feelings about trying to make it good the first time…..
Great post Mark. So much good stuff!! And the RMFW Conference this year was spectacular. Kudos to you and Susie and everyone else who worked so hard to make it a success
And BIG thanks for the book recommendation … I’m going to check it out.
Thank you, Susan ! And thanks for YOUR excellent presentations at the conference.
I had a wonderful time at RMFW, what a blast. I too love Save the Cat–so, so helpful. I doubt I could add any books on writing that you haven’t already read. I’m just now starting GMC by Debra Dixon that I bought at the conference. Happy to find your blog and I’ll be adding you to my sidebar!
Yes….gotta grab GMC by Debra Dixon! Thanks, Rebecca.
Thanks Mark! I’m presenting a workshop, titled Writers Conferences: Connections & Confusion, to a large critique group and plan to share some of your view points – with attribution of course.
Maybe it will inspire a few more writers to join RMFW.
Thanks for your leadership.
Terrific tips. I’ll share them with my http://www.KitchenTableWriting.com workshops. What a terrific conference and I thank all of you for having me present my popular Write Naked! workshop. We had a full house. Thanks so much.
Thank YOU, Anne.
Hey, thanks ! Good luck. These were just a dozen or two out of about 987 tips I think I could have written down ! Thanks for spreading the word about RMFW.